Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Her Dark World; Her Happy World - Carpe Diem Haiku



Carpe Diem #466, Raven (Native American)




Sun is safe in a box 
under his bed;
her dark world 

Her dark world; 
stars happily gleam
in his pockets 

Lo, Sun jumps out,
stars spill out of pockets!
her laughing world


Her laughing world;
Raven refuses to be
seen in the light




RS:)

5 comments:

  1. I like how you've re-told the story in haiku- very nice! :)

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  2. Very nice.
    I took the prompt on a personal level.

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  3. A really great haiku series Ramesh in which you re-tell the story of the Raven with wonderful words. Well done.

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