Carpe Diem #466, Raven (Native American)
Sun is safe in a box
under his bed;
her dark world
Her dark world;
stars happily gleam
in his pockets
Lo, Sun jumps out,
stars spill out of pockets!
her laughing world
Her laughing world;
Raven refuses to be
seen in the light
RS:)
I like how you've re-told the story in haiku- very nice! :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteI took the prompt on a personal level.
Shy raven?
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A really great haiku series Ramesh in which you re-tell the story of the Raven with wonderful words. Well done.
ReplyDeleteExcellent !
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