Friday, August 10, 2012

Ah, I Close My Eyes..


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..



Ah, I Close My Eyes..


All my dreams fall with
a swish of her eyelashes;
ah, I close my eyes

ah, I close my eyes;
illuminous stars sparkle
in my inner sky

( Second one is inspired by Rebecca's Haiku..)

RS:)

8 comments:

  1. I floated through this stunning haiku....

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  2. beautiful with a hint of melancholy ♥♥

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  3. Each word a star... so beautiful these haiku seen behind closed eyes...

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  5. dear ramesh,

    your offerings are pure star dust! thank you for being here as loyal as the sun each week sharing your beauty.

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  6. Good day Ramesh, nice one. Greatly balanced and a wonderful read.

    Namaste

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  7. oh you write HAIKU.....awesome :)

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