Wednesday, August 1, 2012

I Am Still A Man..

Written for




Prompts: Touch, Emotion, Falter..  A haiku here..



I Am Still A Man..

An emotional
touch and lo, my thoughts falter;
I am still a man..


RS:)

9 comments:

  1. Yes, that tender touch does stir up the hormones.

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  2. Ah, I love it. The first one I've read that blends the three words seemlessly, coherently, into a haiku. Excellent work.

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  3. I like this very much, Ramesh. We are still surprised sometimes when our emotions catch us unaware. Lovely haiku.

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  4. Succinctly written..'I am still a man' is a line which could well have a story of it's own...jae

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  5. and you always will be! brevity works so well here..

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  6. Ah, yes!!
    And i gather if you changed gender the last line could be
    "I am a woman"

    The ties that bind us all -- well said Ramesh.

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