Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Needy Affair , That..






Prompts: Affair, Free , Expectation

Needy Affair, That!! 

High expectations
of a free gift from her love;
Needy affair, that

Needy affair, that
and the world doesn't  notice;
that's how it happens


RS:)

6 comments:

  1. It's all about the commas in this one Ramesh..made me read several times..need and a blind eye perhaps..a haiku-tastic affair..jae ;)

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  2. ramesh, very good, perceptive.

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  3. Interesting word play and a picture emerges from shadows :)

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