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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Friday, November 26, 2010
HI ...Haikus for HMH
On his off day, Moon Visits earth, finds himself in My Haikus, wonders..
A mad Butterfly Rests on rose’s shadow; love Finds it Colorful..
Very beautiful haikus Sir...ReplyDelete
The first one is simply awesome... :)
I like both Haikus, Ramesh. I enjoy the self-referencing you do occasionally in your haikus with relation to the natural world--the moon in particular. I like the second haiku because it paints the illusory nature of love "rests on rose's shadow." At least that is what I got from it--the shadow is as colorful as the real thing. Nice work. Thanks for your kind comment.ReplyDelete
Rameshji!! the Moon wonders if you would enjoy a tête-à-tête meal at a café :) especially since she is visiting the earth :DReplyDelete
Is the moon enlightened by mere earthlings meanderings I wonder?ReplyDelete
You will have to let me know?
I love your vision.
A mad ButterflyReplyDelete
Rests on rose’s shadow; love
Finds it Colorful..
Is the moon enlightened by mere earthlings meanderings I wonder?
You will have to let me know
Thanks for your visit on my page and your comment which I have reproduced here.. well my answer..
Who Knows.. but every thing is possible in world of thoughts..every thing..so why not..
Well my thanks for truly being there and contemplating and enquiring.. that's how the world of bautiful thoughts would expand..Let us continue to practice Happiness.. Don't forget to visit tomorrow.. it SUNDAY.. OSI DAY.. I will be pouring my heart out..
In India Moon is referred to as HE.. so not really tempted for a sit in cafe..ha, ha, anyways love your humour and for really enjoying the haiku..
i too enjoy your conversations with moon, stars, shadows and flowers.ReplyDelete
you have a lovely way of giving personality to the natural world.
as is your peace filled nature.
Oh the first one fills me with delight. I can just imagine Mr. Moon, finding himself reflected in your words, scratching his head in amazement.ReplyDelete
love the idea of the moon visiting on his day off, and a mad butterfly... two visions i shall carry around for awhile... thank you,ReplyDelete