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Wednesday, November 24, 2010
A Hiku for 3ww
WRITTEN FOR 3WW.... INDEED VERY CHALLENGING PROMPTS.. SHUFFLE, ADVANCE, PANDER.. ENJOYED IT..HOPE YOU TOO..
Panderer ignores Advancing age; she shuffles Through sheets of dark past..
'shuffling through sheets of dark past' - what a fantastic image..and one we must all do..JaeReplyDelete
Ooh, I echo jaerose here: that turn of phrase is stunning imagery. Thank you!ReplyDelete
shuffling through sheets of dark past..sounds intriguing - a beautiful imageryReplyDelete
Ah, people being consumed by life. So terrible and yet so alluring...ReplyDelete
Oh, I am feeling that one. Amazing and excellent. That last line has me feeling like I am walking through sheets of cold wind.ReplyDelete
Excellent. Takes into the mind of panderer.ReplyDelete
She needs to come out of the dark past.. This haiku thing is really a challenge and you are mastering itReplyDelete
What an imagery created here!! The old hand going through her rough dark past!! Sort of echoes in the ears.ReplyDelete
fantastic image in a wonderfully written haiku..thanks for sharing with osw...peteReplyDelete
The shuffling through sheets of dark past is brilliant :)ReplyDelete
go for light..ReplyDelete
Very clever Haiku! Your words evoke in me, sympathy and intrigue for the aging panderer.ReplyDelete
'shuffling through the sheets of dark past', very subtle way of showing the angst =)ReplyDelete
Tautly built around the first word. Good one this.ReplyDelete
LOL. almost too easy. But I don't write Haiku. My short story is a continuing serial, and these words just didn't fit for where I wanted to go next.ReplyDelete
I liked this though. Simple and deep.
Thanks for sharing.