Friday, January 20, 2012

Cold Feet, Strange Footprints




My second take
on Prompt 'Tiptoe'
For Haiku Heights
Thanks to Zongrik again for the prompt....


Winter
walks in tiptoed;
cold feet..

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He always walks
tiptoed in silence;
strange footprints..

RS :)

7 comments:

  1. I like them both.
    I love how your last lines in each are unexpected and perfect.

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  2. The last one made me giggle :) Thanks for the happy thought.

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  3. Superb Haiku's RS, particularly the second one:...

    RS:

    I would like to invite you to write for The Haiku Challenge 2012. The prompts are out, rules are set, and for more details visit here

    Hope you will participate this time..

    Someone is Special

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  4. Beautiful would be the word, for that first one takes my breath away!

    If I could, I would just change only the tense of the second line..

    winter
    walks on tiptoe
    cold feet

    :)

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