Friday, January 27, 2012

Jealous Fairies..

Written for Haiku Heights
prompt : Crimson 
Thanks to Nimue for prompt

Jealous Fairies..

Her heart grows wings
for a colourful flight;
Crimson sky

She flies alone
to shake hands with angels;
jealous fairies

Wears crimson
to meld with the skies;
hide and seek

Fills her pockets
with some glittering stars;
collectors item..

Oh, my dream melts
and I see crimson flowing;
she gifts me wings..


RS :)


  1. Nice series Ramesh. I loved reading them.

  2. Lovely set...specially the last one ~

  3. Lovely series of haiku! I especially enjoyed the first.

  4. Wonderful series, Rameshji :) It was enjoyable.

    I do enjoy it more when you put a lot into a single haiku, than into a series though :) Like one from the tiptoe prompt of last week..

    I'll comment there too!

  5. I love the way you weave a story with your haiku!

  6. This is superb.

    P.S. The next series could be Jealous Fairy makes Butterfly Mad.

  7. It was nice to see how you weaved the prompt word, crimson, into your story.

  8. loved it ....really wonderful....a story and a rhyme weaved in..... really enjoyed it

    here is mine