Thursday, January 13, 2011

Dry Flower Smiles

For Haiku My Heart..

Dry Flower Smiles


Eyes shed tears
Dry flower smiles, for him
It’s hint of water ..


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22 comments:

  1. A Bit of the BlarneyJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:51 AM

    Well done. Two emotions united in one moment. Thank you! Cathy

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  2. SpadomanJanuary 14, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    You told a whole story with a few words. You have the knack. Precious thopughts about water. Water is much more significant than we think. Good stuff here.

    Peace.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    So in touch with the elements. Thanks for this.

    All the best, Boonie

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  4. jocoJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    Grateful for small mercies

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  5. *jean*January 14, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    beautiful...

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  6. ebJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    this thought lingers
    holding these qualities
    in mind...

    xox - eb.

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  7. StephanieJanuary 14, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    simply beautiful

    x..x

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  8. NankaJanuary 14, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Tears and smiles paint a pretty picture together. Different and nicely done RS!!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    There's always a smile coming from the flowers ... enchanting smile! Lovely work!

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    Hello, how are you?
    Simply want to check out on you and offer you our greatest appreciation for your support to potluck poetry. You rock!

    Reminder: week 18 Theme: Languages, Signs and Symbols

    The more you share, the happier we are. Plan ahead and have your entry poem. We are open Sunday 8pm, American Central time, linking in early would benefit your work with more encouragements.

    Hope to see you on Sunday at: http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    Let me know via email if you have questions or doubts.

    Again, we treasure your participation and would be great to see you again on week 18.

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  11. rebeccaJanuary 14, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    ramesh....
    down closer to the soil from the moon and stars.
    you are as lovely on earth as you are in the heavens!

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  12. Noelle ClearwaterJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    This is a lovely haiku. It reminds me of the kind of haiku that basho would write. the relationship between man and the natural world~human emotion and nurture of what we see around us.
    Lovely.
    Noelle

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    a watershed of words...

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  14. Jill BerryJanuary 15, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    I can see this poem in your face. Thank you for sharing it.

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  15. philJanuary 15, 2011 at 11:01 AM


    Simply beautiful.
    Sent a shiver through me.
    I guess that's the test of the truest haiku.

    ~p

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  16. RenaJanuary 15, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    beautiful as always. I've been too busy with school to write any Haikus lately, but I try to still see what others have written

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  17. foxysueJanuary 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Reciprocal love, who would ask for anything more?

    Thank you for these tender words.

    Sue x

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  18. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    cute..

    A++

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  19. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    Nice. I have also recently reflected on water here: http://cloakedmonk.wordpress.com/2011/01/03/water-2/

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  20. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    I like this haiku! Both lovely and sad.

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  21. UnknownJanuary 18, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    Tears and smiles, dry flower..many contrasts in a few words. Thank you.

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  22. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 19, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    Some Awards 4 you, please help by visiting 2 or 3 poets to give birthday wishes, Thanks!

    Your support is valued!
    xxx

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