Friday, January 28, 2011

Hi Haiku for Haiku My Heart

Strong wind takes
His dream away, unripened
Fruit falls..


I find my shadow
Dancing ahead of me, oh,
Light is left behind



  1. Very serious and concentrated with some intense activity, seen in the Haiku's here!!

  2. You share wonderful inspirations with each word you choose. Have a wonderful week.

  3. It seems that you’re feeling very pensive right now. I wish you well.

    All the best, Boonie

  4. Pyaara Dost,
    Good Evening!
    Hope everything is fine with you!Low spirits and sad feelings won't suit you dost!
    You spread enthusiasm and postive vibrations!
    Cheer up!God Bless You!
    You are in my prayers!
    Wishing you a beautiful evening,

  5. this has caused me to pause....very interesting movement

  6. I'm feeling like I need to send you some good positive energy, and I will. I think this way from the comments, not the haiku. But your words do spell a little gloom, but perhaps the shadow is from the sunshine that is nearby.The wind brings an end to the storm. Hope all is well. Always a pleasure to stop here.


  7. good morning ramesh...
    i have to say i love these haiku deeply.
    there is emotion and intimacy.
    a brush with loss.

    very thoughtful and full of insight..

    thank you for such thought provoking haiku.

  8. Dear Ramesh,

    I too am taken by your deep words, sometimes the haiku is a place to simply be, not knowing what words will follow?

    To be sure words will follow! We are all from the same source, we all feel and share the same needs!

    This is a beautiful tribe of support, sometimes profound words and understanding, sometimes a little funny comment, but all sent for the purpose of love and up-building.

    I thank you for the same, but am not sure which two posts on mood you were referring to?

    Thank you Ramesh for your caring words,

    Love Sue x

  9. These are magnificent examples of haiku. The first one really lingers in my mind.


  10. Beautiful and wistful juxtaposition of light and shadow. Bravo!

  11. I have seen that unripened fruit fall, and it always leaves me with a wistful feeling...

    Two Maidens Dancing