Sunday, February 13, 2011

For Poetry Potluck.. Poet's Love

For One Stop Poetry Form ~ Tanka and for Poetry Potluck..

I say to Rainbow,

" Hey where do you come from, dear,
and where do you go
I am just in love with you,

So not bothered to know.. "

(Hope it is 5-7-5-7-7..)

For Poetry Potluck..

Poet's Love

Clouds rain,
Showering words
Poet immerses

Each word
Soaked in passion
Rocks melt

Sun rises, and
Rainbow appears
Reflects love

Music from flutter
Of butterfly's wings
Flowers dance

Moon is quiet
Watching expressions
On faces of stars

Clouds and rocks
Sun, rain and rainbow,
Stars and flowers

Butterflies & Moon
Ah, to think of a poem
Without them...



  1. Oh yes!! This is really true, Ramesh... it's quite unimaginable to write a poem without at least one of these elements... in some form or the other, they always make an appearance in our poems...
    Such a delightful read as always, Ramesh... beautiful and perfect poem for our potluck this week! A treat for the soul!

    A very happy valentine's day to you and your beloved from me and all of us here at potluck!

  2. Delightful I enjoyed reading it..
    thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  3. beautiful imagery ~ rainbows and sunshine ~ love, love, ~ Lib ~

  4. Beautiful nature inspires love..

  5. I love these! Especially that first conversation.

  6. love the talking to yourself in the end.. happy valentine! here's mine..

  7. Indeed fine words
    Love is so individual - we have so many ways to look at her

    Nice tanka
    Thanks for sharing with One Stop

  8. Fantastic works..
    love them all... :)