For One Stop Poetry Form ~ Tanka and for Poetry Potluck..
I say to Rainbow,
" Hey where do you come from, dear,
and where do you go
I am just in love with you,
So not bothered to know.. "
(Hope it is 5-7-5-7-7..)
For Poetry Potluck..
Soaked in passion
Sun rises, and
Music from flutter
Of butterfly's wings
Moon is quiet
On faces of stars
Clouds and rocks
Sun, rain and rainbow,
Stars and flowers
Butterflies & Moon
Ah, to think of a poem
Oh yes!! This is really true, Ramesh... it's quite unimaginable to write a poem without at least one of these elements... in some form or the other, they always make an appearance in our poems...ReplyDelete
Such a delightful read as always, Ramesh... beautiful and perfect poem for our potluck this week! A treat for the soul!
A very happy valentine's day to you and your beloved from me and all of us here at potluck!
Lovely tanka xReplyDelete
Delightful I enjoyed reading it..ReplyDelete
thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
sweet love words.. very nice !ReplyDelete
A delightful tanka!ReplyDelete
Happy V Day.
beautiful imagery ~ rainbows and sunshine ~ love, love, ~ Lib ~ReplyDelete
Delightful colorful tanka!ReplyDelete
Beautiful nature inspires love..ReplyDelete
I love these! Especially that first conversation.ReplyDelete
love the talking to yourself in the end.. happy valentine! here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/ReplyDelete
Indeed fine wordsReplyDelete
Love is so individual - we have so many ways to look at her
Thanks for sharing with One Stop
Beautiful expressions of love....ReplyDelete
love them all... :)