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Thursday, September 2, 2010
3 WW ( 2) : Turning Positive
A negative thought
Danced on the hard floor
Of my mind
And breaking the barriers
Pulled by humble gravity
Fell on the soft surface
Of the heart,
And lo! Turned positive..
Don't bring negatives
To the surface, why break
Prompted by Heart..
Door Crackles, recognizing
Footsteps from the past
Posted by Ramesh Sood at 9:51 AM
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Lo and behold Rameshji...that positivity is exuberating!! Like this new avatar.ReplyDelete
And breaking the barriers" - Lovely!!
You really have broken all barriers Rameshji and I see you soaring... :)
Mind and heart at loggerheads. Glad atleast one of them turns us positive :)ReplyDelete
All of them are great...loved the 2nd one...well hidden myths about oneself are painful when exposed...well said!ReplyDelete
the haiku, if i may say so, needs to be reduced to 17 or less syllables...I would suggest weather-beaten instead of dilapidated...:)
luv when negative turns positive - very good.ReplyDelete
Well said Ramesh!ReplyDelete
It is a sign of strength to break negativity and be positive!
Short but nicely written!