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Saturday, September 4, 2010
Haiku Heights - Prompt: Beauty
Opposite steps Out of the mirror, shattering The myth of beauty
Both are beautiful.ReplyDelete
Love towns wet roads.
moon walks... that is a visionaries eyeReplyDelete
melting clouds, moon walks,..ReplyDelete
they are stunning beauty...
loved your entry.
My Beauty Entry
Ramesh. Thanks for visiting my blog.ReplyDelete
My favorite line is "Moon walks on Town's wet roads." This is lovely. Your poems are quite lyrical and this is what I love the most.
I really enjoyed the imagery in both haikus...I also love the line "Moon walks on town’s wet roads." Beautifully done.ReplyDelete
Moon walks on town’s wet roadsReplyDelete
Splashing beauty ....
And whispering in theses ears,
each has it's own take on beauty but they clearly are connected. I love the second best tho, the moons light on the wet roads.... "Splashing beauty" so original!ReplyDelete
loved the second one...the moon is a wonderful topic for poetry...why don't you add music if you like it so much...it's really easy...I could help you thru it!...:)ReplyDelete
Two very different takes on the prompt, Ramesh! :-) I especially liked the second haiku: it really put me there, watching the moonlight shining off puddles. I could even hear the splashing. So nicely done!ReplyDelete
It's about time the myth of beauty is shattered ;) - good one.ReplyDelete
Absolutely loved the second one, moon walking on wet road... Brilliant!