Thursday, February 10, 2011

My Little Soul Shouts

Written for Haiku Challenge..of SiS and Haiku My Heart..


My little soul shouts,
To hold my bigger mind, fails,
Wins heart’s sympathy..

9 comments:

  1. The mind is what gets us in trouble, the wild and untethered mind.

    Great, made me pause and think.

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  2. I would say
    "my little soul shouts,
    to hold my heart, fails,
    Wins minds reasons"

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  3. For me it's soul who wins sympathy of heart.. for haert watches her struggle to lead the mind.. which rarely happens..

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  4. I like this just the way it is, is it not the soul that speaks to the heart, I know mine does! Beautiful job!

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  5. My heart and soul are constantly conversing.

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  6. ramesh...
    you are completely thoughtful,
    and thought filled.

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  7. Remeshji, what a Haiku.. No words..

    Someone is Special

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  8. the mind is wonderful yet a mystery to most.... and we are three...

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  9. The whisper of heart and soul will always tug at us. Beautiful.

    Deb

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