Written for OSI : Uncomfortable
Haiku Heights : Confession
Invading my space
And telling me not to feel
You are so gracious
For at least not asking me
To pretend comfort..
Moon tries to see through thick clouds
Must be missing me..
Well that should make you
Happy, you are not alone
Who’s stung by conceit..
How can one answer
“ Hey, do you like me?”
Answering is tough
Yes, but then asking like that
“Hey, are you waitingFor a confession?” “No.” Still
By: RS : )
Thanks for sharing these... I like the examples on Confession.ReplyDelete
I am going to try them too~
Maybe the slightest resemblance to mine, Rameshji. nothing more of a connection, I felt :) but it was like different from what you usually write in a way.ReplyDelete
some truth on these 'kus. i've actually experienced the first one heheReplyDelete
Great writing here. The ones about discomfort are ones I can especially relate to, with both of my parents recently moving in with me.ReplyDelete
You must be a proffessional haiku writer :)ReplyDelete
very intense Haiku this week Ramesh great reads for this weeks HH and OSI!ReplyDelete
I loved the last one.ReplyDelete
Waiting for a confession?
That is so true.
This is a beautiful post.
I really loved it and it spoke to me on a deep level.
Uncomfortable analysed in every way. Excellently done.ReplyDelete
Excellent! I Like both on uncomfortable and confession.ReplyDelete
Struggles to see through thick clouds
Must be missing me.."
stunning! wonderful responses to the prompts!
I found you through Haiku-Heights.ReplyDelete
Your honesty shines through.
Some very honest observations come through.ReplyDelete
LOL!! you made me smile RS!!...with your uncomfortable confessions!! Made me squirm uneasily too!! :D Good ideas in words RS!!ReplyDelete
The moon haiku is perfect, like them all.ReplyDelete
I really like that first set!ReplyDelete
I read in awe, friendReplyDelete
From the depths of your true heart
A gift to readers.
I saw your Haiku on Haiku Heights and love your site. I am Laurie from Hibernationnow.wordpress.com
Back again RS for you have erred :)ReplyDelete
To err is human
Uncomfortable is 5
Confession to make
In all good humor RS!!
OOPs... thanks Nanka...I have corrected.. good to find someone helping me improve..ReplyDelete
many possibilities...well said!ReplyDelete
invading my space and telling me not to feel Uncomfortable... I often questioned myself what does this my space means? with a new soul entering my life and sharing all of me, why then I felt strangled because I lost the freedom I enjoyed. Then I learned that life is better with sacrifices and not with compromises.ReplyDelete
My favorite is the waiting for a confession. That is a tall order, Ramesh.ReplyDelete
Great set covering all the basis of uncomfortable and confessions!ReplyDelete
I love the invitation to be honest!ReplyDelete
Especially the first part and the last one.
I have learned a lot from this poem. Thank you!ReplyDelete
Meaningful reflections. Well done, again!ReplyDelete
I just love it RS..ReplyDelete
Someone is Special
There are some things, I suppose, that I will never confess!ReplyDelete