Written for OSI and Haiku Heights..
Like negative thoughts…
Weeds grow, I remove
Them, but then they keep coming
Beautiful roses,Surrounded by weeds, Don't
We meet them, often..
Here's especially for Haiku Heights Challenge…. Lets know more about Elephant and Ant..
Just made for him, ant
Completes elephant, remove
Her, it's just ‘eleph’ ...
By RS : )
We do meet the roses often, surrounded by weeds - it's kinda like having a blog!ReplyDelete
so very true Ramesh!ReplyDelete
So true... like negative thoughts!ReplyDelete
I thoroughly enjoyed these, especially the first one. So true negative thoughts and weeds, both keep coming back.ReplyDelete
I loved the elephant and ant one - such a clever play with the words.
Thanks for a great read.
a part of life indeed...!ReplyDelete
thoughtful n fun at the same timeReplyDelete
Ramesh, interesting Haiku. I liked them all but the one with the roses I liked the best. Well done my friend.ReplyDelete
Yes. Weeds do come bak like old past. Well said :)ReplyDelete
Good writing, Ramesh. I like the second one as fitting me. I just dread having a closeness encounter with weeds. :)ReplyDelete
I keep hoping for redeeming words to say about weeds, but...ReplyDelete
Day 4: Corn in the Wash
I like the weeds haiku...specially the first one being negative thoughts.ReplyDelete
And you last one is fun and creative ~
Ou thoughts can be compared with weeds. We've to clear them once in a while.ReplyDelete
Your haiku is so simple yet thought provoking.
you did great with the "weed" prompt and the last line what a great twist!ReplyDelete
You're good at haiku, aren't you? :)ReplyDelete
Loved both Haiku! A nice twist to the tale in the first one. I don't mean the elephant's tail! :)ReplyDelete
My OSI Post - Dandelions
Very thoughtful verse. You always write with great feeling.ReplyDelete
Two wonderful poems Ramesh...the haiku made me pause and reflect. Clever play on words.ReplyDelete
Very true statements Ramesh!ReplyDelete
I love the analogies in both weed haikus. Eleph-ant is just fun.ReplyDelete
Oh yes- negative thoughts are very much like weeds- have to keep removing those, don't we? Please stop by mine!ReplyDelete
Hmm...we do meet them often.ReplyDelete
The rose one made me think and the elephant made me smile.ReplyDelete