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Wednesday, March 16, 2011
I Know You Blushed..
Written for 3WW.... Tickle, Breeze, Mellow.. from my archives of yesteryears..
When mellow breeze Tickled my face and then yours I know you blushed..
Utterly charming, and romantic.ReplyDelete
Yes, very romantic. Nice words.ReplyDelete
Utterly sweet... endearing.ReplyDelete
Sheilagh Lee said :sweet charming and utterly romantic well doneReplyDelete
Simple and sweet and a moment we can all identify with!ReplyDelete
that is really really sweetReplyDelete
such a nice piece!
Cute Haiku RS......and it reminded me of yesteryear heroines from Bollywood movies!! :DReplyDelete
So hard to hide a blush, nice.ReplyDelete
Wrapped up soooooooooooo nicely :)ReplyDelete
A welcomed treat after the night I had.
Yes, definitely sweet and romantic :)ReplyDelete
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I can see that blush so clearly! (I can even feel the burning in my cheeks!)ReplyDelete
You have a most wonderful way of writing so very lightly on the page to create magic.
Awe, so sweet : )ReplyDelete
the intimacy of a touch between two... beautiful...ReplyDelete
Ah, to be young again and feel a gentle breeze and the warmth of color diffusing across her face... This is so tender and delicate--the perfect haiku.ReplyDelete
Subtle sensual and evocative...I like it.ReplyDelete
I like this one. It is subtle and romantic. I agree. Very interesting Ramesh!ReplyDelete