Friday, August 6, 2010

Arriving Stronger..

My immediate last post mainly on 3ww prompt raised a querry by a friend..How does one exercise control.. I have tried to answer here using again the prompts given by 3WW.. I have tried to put what I think..


Arriving Stronger

Drink from the cup of vanity
And you would have a feeble conscientious
Not so difficult, then to
predict
What lies at the end of the road…
But you can say - who is bothered
Life is here and in the now...
And I would find
My foundations shaken again
Yes, doubt is indeed a powerful force
Pushing one to make a retreat
But then a questioning soul
Puts one back on the track
Life goes on, on and on
Yet the track never appears
To be reaching a concrete destination…
And one’s soul too doesn’t tire
Itself from questioning
Thus keeping one strong on one’s feet
Reaching may take a bit longer
But thanks to an untiring soul
And with the blessing of God
One may , in the end, arrive stronger…

To get a feel of this.. do visit " In spite of nocturnal temptations.." written for 3ww.

4 comments:

  1. Reaching may take a bit longer
    But thanks to an untiring soul
    And with the blessing of God
    One may , in the end, arrive stronger…

    Loved the way u closed...

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  2. doubt is indeed a powerful force
    Pushing one to make a retreat


    True,
    and well,

    All's well that ends well.

    Interesting read.

    Regards
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. It i s needed that a person walks a difficult path to reach a beautiful destination, only then you arrive stronger. We should learn to say NO to our temptations. Surely you have arrived stronger. A very nice message sir.

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  4. Aye, the soul is never tired of all the questions. Is there a destination, I wonder at times,for I dont see it yet I hope to get there stronger. :)Nicely penned.

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