My First Haiku
Flowers chase butterflies
Trees around laugh
And the second one:
In dreamy fields
Shingles turn into stars
"Words fly like colourful kites on Haiku Heights "
"One single Impression.. I feel emboldened to give my thoughts expression"
"Three Words Wednesday.. lets the poet in me, with words, play"
I liked the first one more. :)ReplyDelete
Nice first tries! Saying a lot with very little. That's the trick.ReplyDelete
A perfect connect.. nature and wordsReplyDelete
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A very good attempt!
Whenever you touch nature as the theme you make the readers eco friendly.
First attempt is very good.
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Wishing you a creative week ahead,
trees around laugh...lovely!!ReplyDelete
Excellent Ramesh - agree the first is stunningly beautiful.ReplyDelete
Beautiful one my friend....ReplyDelete