Thursday, October 13, 2011

Dreams Spilling From My Eyes..



Written for the photo prompt of blubell books...




Dreams floating behind
Your closed eyes, and spilling
From mine,  are they same..

RS : )

14 comments:

  1. short and lovely.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. short and lovely.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  3. we love to imagine that we are so like our children, but are we? we won't know, for real, until we, let go, let them become adults and choose for themselves.

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  4. Maybe, maybe not :) But the little one's dreams count a lot more I feel! Lovely take!

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  5. RS, lovely haiku.. very cute sleep and I wish the little one's dream should be fulfilled..

    Someone is Special

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  6. Beautifully put... and does it really matter? I love that photo - your words are wonderful!

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  7. so sweet an image, and so lovely a thought.

    Happy Friday !

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  8. Yes, if the dream is to let the little one find and follow his own dreams.

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  9. oh my gosh ramesh!
    i have forever longed for you to add photos to your wondrous haiku. yes, your haiku always have the ability to paint images. i am just such a visual person i love the added experience of using my eyes.
    this is so touching and full of the human experience.

    thank you for gracing my moment!

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  10. I wonder if you both dream of heaven. This poem is so lovely. I'm happy to have read it. Thank you!

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  11. short and filled with love
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/17/to-my-son/

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  12. Succinct and sweet. You do wonder what goes on in their little minds.

    Thanks for the Haiku.

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