Friday, October 21, 2011

Haiku All for Haiku Lovers..


Haiku for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..
And
You Know .. That blog?



Seeds of grains fly out
Of my palm; pair of pigeons
Arrive for their food...

I walk on yet hear
The sounds of their fluttering
Wings, music to ears..


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My entry for You Know that Blog.
Prompt : Debonnaire



Oh, it is so rare
Truly appreciates, he's
A real debonnaire

RS : )

11 comments:

  1. Indeed, Music to the ear. Wonderfully visual haiku! Wishing you well! Cathy

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  2. I can hear it too.. fluttering wings... Love your haikus! I wish you a wonderful weekend!

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  3. Nice imagery here RS!! When I throw a few grains a host of pigeons swoop down and I hear their fluttering wings day and night!! There is one which tries to come in and sit on the cupboard everyday!!

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  4. I just love pigeons, and am so glad to hear them described with such love.

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  5. I could hear the music !
    Happy Friday!

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  6. When I travel to Mexico, I am always amazed at how many pigeons frequent the zocalo (the central square), no matter what city. And there are always children running after the birds, trying to catch them. It's really quite delightful!


    Haiku Your Heart Here

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  7. I love that you can create imagery with mere words... even if I dislike pigeons!

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