Wednesday, April 20, 2011

I Knead Words Softly.. .




Written for 3WW... Knead, Cleanse, Melt



Candle’s melting wax
I try to knead, sticks on hands
Cleansing hurts...no.. oops!


Had to knead my mind for this haiku.. hope you smiled...to hear cry of  sudden pain.... ha, ha...   but then what had come spontaneously is here....


I knead words softly
Thoughts melt and flow on paper
Mind cleanses itself




RS  : )





19 comments:

  1. Yes, you do 'knead words softly'..and each little word sculpture is a treasure..Jae

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  2. the first did make me smile. the second was beautifully said.

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  3. I also agree with RmpWritings, love the flow of words in the second one. Brilliant. Cheers.

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  4. Enjoyed both, but the second was best.

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  5. absolutely amazing...I've heard of weaving words.. now this kneading words is excellent..

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  6. Thoughts melt and flow on paper :)

    What could have resulted in the melting

    Warmth of the words and that of love warms the heart and the emotions ooze out, through the eyes, warm, flowing; some dry on the cheeks; some twinkle in the eyes, the rest flow on paper :)


    Regards

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  7. And yes I have written something on a lighter vein... :) though not very inspiring... would be obliged if you could spare a few moments :) :)

    http://heartspeakrm.blogspot.com/2011/04/would-he-be-as-mad.html


    Regards

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  8. "Knead words softly". What a beautiful image! Great poem!

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  9. Both excellent examples of your art, but the second one did it for me.

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  10. These are lovely. The second is a stroke of genius.

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  11. Lovely isn't that we all do knead words but you express it so beautifully,

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  12. I relate to and adore the second piece.

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  13. Nice, Ramesh~ Both of these speak to me through imagery... the pain of kneading the molten candle wax; the emotional pain soothed by kneading words softly in a journal.

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  14. Nice haikus - but the second one was just amazing!!! Really lovely...

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  15. both are beautiful and the second one is fabulous.

    ha. "just someone" said what i wanted to say. :)

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  16. Both are wonderful :) Yes, I heard you say ouch when I read the first one!

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