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Sunday, May 16, 2010
Thoughts on OSI Prompt - Trembling
The tiny rosebud
Opened up, a bit unsure,
Waiting fingers stayed still..
" Welcome breeze!"
Exclaim fresh leaves
But the dry cry, trembling
"No please, no please."
( From my book A Little More Than ordinary)
A mild tremor
And the skyscraper stood trembling
Despite a deep foundation
Yet, far deeper are the wounds
Of mother earth , who
Expresses anguish, occasionally
Only if man could empathise
For the sake of his own prolongation..
Whenever I wrote
He trembled with fear
For, he thought
He will have to lend an ear..
And I too
Never showed mercy
My spontaneous poetry...
Posted by Ramesh Sood at 6:12 AM
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thank you for such a lovely read!ReplyDelete
Poetry that is true need not worry about mercy!ReplyDelete
each poem is wonderful. I have felt the way the last poem suggests!ReplyDelete
Oh, these are wonderful!ReplyDelete
Four frames of fantastic wordplay. u captured that essence of tremble in all Mr.Sood :) i liked the second one best of all.ReplyDelete
I am so happy to find you visiting me and inspiring with your comments..I agree with you Sandy and hence have been able to continue writing..
What a lesson in perspective in the second poem. Brilliant.ReplyDelete
another fantastic tremble poem...:)ReplyDelete
keep writing Ramesh, not many have that kind of gift!
Thanks Mojo and Amity..you inpire..yes I will keep writing..ReplyDelete
These were good, I loved the first one.ReplyDelete
The last one was quite funny, however we don't tremble at the thought of your poetry! :)